Selina
I love the way its laid out, its really effective. I wouldn't change much about this, however when creating this on Photoshop be careful with the text on top of the hair so it doesn't clash. This is simple yet effective.
Dawn/Sabrina
You need to include your barcode, price and pull quote, but its really good. You should number the pictures on your contents page. On your double page spread, only use one pull quote do you dont give to much away, so that people will need to read it all.
Sonali/Komal/Tiasha
I really like detail in this and I love the masthead, its so unique.
I love the whole thing
However, make the font bigger to fill the spaces.
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